You will move to Toronto for work You know some people who live there Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

Essay topics:

You will move to Toronto for work. You know some people who live there.
Ask them for help finding accommodation
Tell them where you would like to live
Tell them the type of place you are looking for

Dear Rajesh,
I am very happy to let you know that, I got job offer from SMG Hospital Etobicoke Toromto as nurse but i am not aware area and accommodation. I wish you could help me to find appropriate place for me and my family , You been living in Toronto from last five years so you well aware about rent and other living condition , my basic requirement like it should be near school and easy access to public transport, so it will easy and convince for me to go work as well as for my child to go primary, I don't like to share with anyone so look for private tenant ,my first choice is an apartment or studio flat, if it's not available i can go with small house or basement.
If you find anything good for me just contact on my email address and we will follow up step, i am very tionexcited to see you soon ,thanks in advance for help me out in this situation.
yous best friend
harry

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Rajesh, I am very happy to let you know that, I ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...Hospital Etobicoke Toromto as nurse but i am not aware area and accommodation. I ...
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...rea and accommodation. I wish you could help me to find appropriate place for me and my family ...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...d appropriate place for me and my family , You been living in Toronto from last fi...
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...re about rent and other living condition , my basic requirement like it should be ...
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...nd convince for me to go work as well as for my child to go primary, I dont like ...
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... well as for my child to go primary, I dont like to share with anyone so look for p...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e with anyone so look for private tenant ,my first choice is an apartment or studi...
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...nt or studio flat, if its not available i can go with small house or basement. I...
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...ail address and we will follow up step, i am very tionexcited to see you soon ,th...
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...p, i am very tionexcited to see you soon ,thanks in advance for help me out in thi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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...nce for help me out in this situation. yous best friend harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17341040462 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31168107397 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 16.3608247423 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.34122572 44.8134815571 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.5 76.5299724578 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.25 16.8248392259 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 4.34317383033 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313509934261 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144049588995 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111541829041 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254302255525 0.12726935374 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252324971485 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 8.37731958763 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 7.45979381443 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.79 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 8.54432989691 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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