You work in a gym but you are not a qualified gym instructor. A friend has written to you for advice on how to get fit and healthier..
Write a letter to your friend offering some suggestions. In your letter
. remind your friend that you are not an instructor
. offer some suggestions
. ask your friend if she would like to talk to a trained instructor
Dear Mary,
Hope you are doing great. I received the email you sent two weeks ago enquiring about tips to keep fit and healthy.
Well,I'd like to remind you that I'm not a professional gym teacher and I won't be able to offer a detailed information concerning staying healthier.
I'd suggest you try these few hints. Firstly, you must not eat dinner late at night that should be taken on or before 7pm and it must be a light mark for easy digestion. Secondly, you might want to go for roadwork on weekends and if you don't mind,I could also join you.
But if you are not satisfied with these few tips, you may choose to speak to one of our trained professional gym teacher where am currently working. Although, the charge is quite expensive,but you won't regret spending that much as you will get an in-depth teaching on keeping fit.
Kindly get back to me as soon as possible to know your decisions.
Best regards,
Toyin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Although, the charge is quite expensive,but you wont regret spending that much as y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58083832335 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46571383218 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730538922156 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2445672485 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353525766389 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127098905946 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612050377269 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174698352262 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509460066511 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.