Some people believe that studying at the University or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
These days, the choice people make is highly dependent on an individual. While it is argued by some that advancing to tertiary institution is the key to a successful career, others think getting a job after school is better. Although both views have valid points that are worth discussing, I believe an individual should choose to earn educational degree.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people opt for a job. Firstly, some individuals prefer to start work immediately after school to make money. This is due to the fact thatwhen they attain a certain age, they may be expected by their parents to take care of some family or personal responsibilities. For instance, in New Zealand,most of the job seekers are young school leaverswho wants to be financially independent. Secondly, some category of people needs work experience instead of acquiring a certificate. As in most cases, this is a major requirement when seeking for employment in some organizations.
On the other hand, supporters of this argument believe that to reach a successful career is to study in the University and I agree. In other words, most professional careers such as doctors, lawyers bankers would require a certificate before an individual can practice and excel in that career pathway. As a result, an individual with certain skills or experience would not get employed in jobs that need professionalism.
In Conclusion, although both opinions have convening arguments for and against university degree, I believe that it is essential to obtain a certificate in order to be successful in a given career choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in most cases, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15209125475 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08054726135 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7221936882 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313775868431 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102097533152 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858055963232 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188049216803 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620255992253 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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