Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your customers who have bought a P.C. keyboard roughly five months ago. I am writing to inform you about a tech-fault related to it and ask you to take action about it.
As I am a stay-at-home self-employed engineer, my keyboard is of vital use to my work. Unfortunately, its "ENTER" button gets stuck from time to time and disturbs both my work and concentration. Not to mention that it makes some damages to my digital files and causes considerable delays to my project, as a result, I am behind the schedule.
I believe, as this piece has a one-year warranty, it would be great if you replace it with a new one or still better, refund me thus I will be able to purchase another one.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. By the way, should you have further questions about this matter do not hesitate to contact me on email@gmail.com.
Yours faithfully,
SAEED ATAEI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I will be able to purchase another one. I look forward to hearing from you at yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, thus, as a result, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59763313609 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06355768116 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5727178748 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15928098846 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655735950826 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367110257516 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892084043546 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034500537471 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.