You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.• Describe the problem with the equipment• Explain how this problem is affecting

Dear Hp Printers,

My Name is Dinesh and I am writing you this letter to you to state the problem I have been facing with one of the printers I have bought recently. I am a graphic designer and mostly works at home. I recently bought a printer from HP exclusive showroom located in Nehru place; Its A4007 3D Laser printer purchased on 20th June 2019. The printer was not functioning fine from the day it was installed and soon it was reported to the customer care support. In spite of installing new cartridges, the printer is unable to load the ink in cartridges thus prompting Error 404.

I cater to several industries which include educational institutions, Print media, and others. Since we are at the end of the financial year I have tons of orders to full fill with deadlines. Some of the orders are from the government and if not delivered on time them my company will be penalized.

I request you to please look into this matter as soon as possible. As per technician, it generally takes 15-20 days to fix a machine and I can't buy the time from my customers, therefore, I request you to please provide me a spare machine so that I can start my production.

I hope my request will be considered with at most priority.

Thanking you,
Dinesh

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... institutions, Print media, and others. Since we are at the end of the financial year...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... of orders to full fill with deadlines. Some of the orders are from the government and if n...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...takes 15-20 days to fix a machine and I cant buy the time from my customers, therefo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, thus, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56828193833 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66198882016 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616740088106 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1915191426 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166922153613 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060503477841 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651980685439 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083865859822 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030638372398 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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