You work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied you that equipment. In your letter,
- Describe the problem with an equipment
-explain how this problem is affecting your work
-Say what you want the shop or company to do?
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards the issue with a piece of an equipment, which is mouse part of Computer desktop.
I have been using almost all the electronic equipment's from your shop from over 5 years. As well as i have never had a reason to complain to your shop before.
The trouble with part is firstly, unable to use right click button along with scrolling issue. And also I noticed that, it was even stopping when using the left button. Initially, i suspect that it is all because of the improper connection. however, even then the issue was same.
Consequently, it was stopping all my work and moving it to in pending status. For your information, due to some reason i cannot even return to my office and replace the affected part of the computer. I would have been completed all my works by now, due to this it may affect to my performance and low rate in progress.
As we know that, we do have a warranty card for this part, Along with Home service facility, which is offered by your shop during my purchase. Therefore, i would like to request for providing me the new proper equipment, also it is appreciable in advance as per the contract for sending an agent over here and recheck to ensure that everything is well in working stage.
It will be the fantastic if you also recommend me with any other expedite process to resolve this issue as soon as possible.
I am looking forward for the problem being solved.
Yours Sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I am ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is mouse part of Computer desktop. I have been using almost all the electron...
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Line 13, column 181, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... when using the left button. Initially, i suspect that it is all because of the i...
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Line 13, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...all because of the improper connection. however, even then the issue was same. Con...
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Line 17, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or your information, due to some reason i cannot even return to my office and rep...
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Line 21, column 155, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our shop during my purchase. Therefore, i would like to request for providing me ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 276.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64855072464 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4808233214 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0741614591 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1875 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335696779767 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915949871011 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602876546102 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142266477421 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695796731923 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.