You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interests towards you, which is regarding requirement for one participant in upcoming social events as an organizer.
This task appeals' to me great since, I have been working as an cultural lead in various communities. As well as it will be a pleasure moment for me to handle it well and then achieve for the amazing result.
So far, I could be able to accomplish my work without any issues. However, keeping in mind about the time constraint, I would like to receive more information's related to the event, so I can cling myself to the event necessary things and commence my plan on the same. Therefore, requesting you to elucidate me the complete structure of an event. Also provide me the chances for presenting my plans in the prior, for the best outcome and to avoid any consequences.
Moreover, I worked as a full time employee throughout my seven years of experience. And I have managed to fulfill all the program requirements without any further issues. Please consider my points and confer me an opportunity for the successful event,I appreciate in advance for making me being a part of a fantastic occurrence.
I am looking forward for the wonderful social occasion.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... me great since, I have been working as an cultural lead in various communities. A...
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Line 17, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...sequences. Moreover, I worked as a full time employee throughout my seven years of e...
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Line 17, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... an opportunity for the successful event,I appreciate in advance for making me bei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87307110735 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641860465116 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0676970001 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117041005167 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439438993218 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516937594348 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727423127501 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680418850163 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.