You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter.
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months.
Say how your work could be done while you are away.
Ask for his/ her help in arranging it.
Dear Mr. Robert,
My name is Julie Dukson, Assistant Engineer in the Mechanical Department. I am writing this letter in regards to the new training program in London.
I am really interested in joining the new course that is organized in the head office in London. The course description is directly related to my profile and will enhance my capabilities a lot. As it is a six-month extensive training only on mechanical advances that I am currently working on, it will give me an edge in my upcoming projects.
While completing my training, I will also handle my work. Moreover, we can indulge in all the meetings and keep updated about my work here. Furthermore, I can brief about my work to my colleague Rebecca, who is my teammate, hence will be able to look through when I am not there.
I will really appreciate if you will refer me for this from our department, and help me get prepared for this opportunity.
Yours Sincerely,
Julie Dukson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Robert, My name is Julie Dukson, Assistant Engin...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...al Department. I am writing this letter in regards to the new training program in London. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve me an edge in my upcoming projects. While completing my training, I will al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79041916168 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83070809429 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.116858003 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164060432848 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663820663234 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406521402839 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827115503874 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288354405623 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.