You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Manager,
I am writing to formally request your support and approval for a six-month assignment at our head office in India. I believe this opportunity will greatly benefit both my professional development and our company as a whole.
Having worked as a project operator for the past year, I have identified several areas where our team can improve, such as time management, focused goal setting, and honing our field-specific skills. I strongly believe that the work-management skills and practices employed at our head office in India are far superior and can address these challenges effectively. By spending six months there, I will be able to learn and absorb valuable techniques and strategies to help our team become more competitive and successful.
During my absence, I have devised a plan to ensure a seamless workflow. Mr. Sudeep Lamsal, who possesses extensive knowledge of my responsibilities, will handle day-to-day tasks. In case of emergencies, I will be readily available to provide guidance and support remotely. I have complete confidence in ABC's abilities to manage the workload efficiently, ensuring minimal disruption to our operations.
To make this assignment a success, I kindly request your assistance in coordinating with the head office in India. I also propose that if feasible, I receive additional training during my stay to further enhance my skills and contribute to transforming our organization's working style.
Thank you for considering my request. I am eager to hear your positive response and look forward to this opportunity to make a significant impact on our company's growth and success.
Yours sincerely,
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| 2023-10-06 | mehjabin | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43076923077 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19106556001 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0905556402 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233381536353 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079204801771 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685958614885 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126321642281 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660478120683 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 41.2886597938 220% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.