Dear Mr Smith,
My name is Sagar Chokshi and I am working as lead developer in our information technology department of Mumbai branch in India. When I was working on our latest development of email campaign, I came across few hurdles regarding product life cycle and our customer base. As I am working in from India, I am not 100% sure of effectiveness of product in New York market and if possible then would love to work there for six months to gain that knowledge and boost the overall outcome.
Although, I will be living in New York, I will perform tasks which can be done remotely for our Mumbai office. Moreover, reminder of my duties will be taken care by my colleagues. As I have already explained most of the needed things, I trust that they will be able to handles it without any difficulty.
Though, I have done all research about accommodation and travel, it will be great if you can help me plan out my schedule and flight and living arrangement. Also, as I am planning to work from October to April, do let me know about winter conditions. I heard, it is quite bad and want to prepare myself.
Please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely,
Sagar Chokshi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61214953271 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66114418194 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1094301443 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154095360893 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496136417008 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532145339469 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820154772225 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552613259826 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.