You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Hi Roberts,
I am writing this letter to express my interest to participate in advance marketing training going to take place in our company's headquater London and it will be six months long course.
As you are aware I have been promoted to Assistant manager last month, and this training is advisable for managers that is why I am willing to pursue it. I can assure you the skills posses by me through this training eventually benefits to company's sales as it would help me to stratergise the policies smarty for our brands campaign to increse the sales.
As the training duration is for six months and it implies that I will have to stay away from the work for that period of time. In order to manage my work and backlogs I have already talked to Simon and he is ready to take care my part of work in my absance, moreover post completion of the training I am happy to work for stratched hours or if required I will work on weekends.
I would like you to recommand my name for this training from our branch and approve my absence under new learning criteria of company leave policy.
Waiting to hear you soon.
Your faithfully
Amanda
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ave to stay away from the work for that period of time. In order to manage my work and backlog...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
... my absence under new learning criteria of company leave policy. Waiting to hear ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50480769231 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44253008527 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2494877032 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316398018934 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132134526104 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483019661799 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141424481957 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633425305103 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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