In contemporary era, people are not getting enough exercise off-hours and that is concerning factor regarding health for upcoming civilization. Due to lethargic nature of humans as well as advancement in technology, it is hard for people to workout or even focus on their health. My reasons are elucidated and put forward in ensuing paragraphs with possible solutions.
Pondering on issue, first and foremost reason is lifestyle, people live in nuclear family and always spend time doing something. For instance, they are either busy with work or performing house-hold chores which lead to very little free time for themselves, let alone for their fitness. Nowadays, stress level in people is sky-high with very little pay in return which lead to work multiple shift or work part time in that free time or in weekends. This cause them to always think about work and money as the expense of they health. Moreover, in this free-time, rather than working out they prefer to spend time relaxing on social medias, idiot box aka television or gaming.
However, expounding on possible solutions, we need better jobs and employers who are willing to provide better facilities and relax work environment. For example, in Japan people are officially allowed to take nap in between your work schedule which is great step toward making better life. Although, that not enough, work place should also offer better money and gym rooms in work place, let alone free gym membership. Nevertheless, government can also help in this issue by making mandatory rules to provide certain facilities and incentives to employees.
To recapitulate, it is quite conspicuous that lifestyle of human in bad due to issue with stress, money and even time but if employers and government work together to show support, we can change the world and make earth better and healthy place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ting enough exercise off-hours and that is concerning factor regarding health for upcoming ci...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ich lead to work multiple shift or work part time in that free time or in weekends. This ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1045751634 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64247161637 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0505665204 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290130158918 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098064374618 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531279584944 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149945332806 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664157053356 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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