Dear Jaibir,
I am Shyam working as a Lead Systems Engineer with Raytheon Technologies since 2015. Due to a personal emergency, I want to work from our head office located in Iowa, United States of America for six months so it would be great if you can consider my application and approve my request.
As you already know that my father has been unwell for few months now, a family doctor has recently told me about the advanced treatment that is available at the Iowa State hospital. Our company's head office is located at Cedar Rapids which also happens to be in close proximity to the hospital my father will be admitted in.
I have been able to get in touch with our counterpart team to know about the facilities available. I must admit that I am relieved to know that our headquarters' infrastracture such as uninterrupted power supply, excellent internet connectivity could help me work without impacting my efficiency as well as productivity. I can assure you about on-time delivery of the current release.
Would you be able to help with obtaining approval from Human Resources department? Also, it would be really appreciated if you could touchbase with Digital team to issue me a fully conifgured laptop to facilitate my assignments.
Thank you so much for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Shyam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...edar Rapids which also happens to be in close proximity to the hospital my father will be admit...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my efficiency as well as productivity. I can assure you about on-time delivery o...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99099099099 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90732878581 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2990654321 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.727272727 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23430532203 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889359736741 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695410676295 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133402934502 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746591599694 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.