Dear Alan,
I am writing this letter to express my interest to work in our head office situated in Singapore for a limited period.
As you know I am the only resource that our company has in India, it becomes difficult for me to co-ordinate with other counterparts who work there in our HO. I have sensed there is always huge communication gap between each of team-mates when they want to convey anything to me. It will be beneficial not only for me but also for our establishment if I get a chance to work with other onsite colleagues for six months. This will help me by enhancing my ability to communicate with other members of team seamlessly and effectively which will certainly improve our productivity.
Since I am going to work from our abroad office, I do not think that there will be any issue with our regular business. The only alteration that is going to happen is my place of deputation, which has merely some relation with my work flows. Furthermore, I can assure that I will put my additional efforts to buckle up abilities so that no work during our work hours can get hampered.
I would request you to consider my sincere request and change my place of deputation. I also know you are the key person in our company whose words are always valued. Therefore, if you could put through your words in front of management my deputation will surely be changed.
Looking forward with you support
Yours sincerely,
Prajwal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours sincerely, Prajwal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78039215686 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69318989649 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.329509216 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233501152967 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898262739133 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628305425854 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126791723138 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513284740813 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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