You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Jackson,
I am writing this letter to request you for arranging work at company’s head office based at Australia for next six months starting from September. Indeed my elder brother who is living in Australia has been suffering from chronic disorder since 2016 and he needs to be operated to avoid any negative consequences. Besides, healthcare professionals strongly advice for bed rest for minimum 4 months after operation, which makes it mandatory for me to accommodate him.
I completely understand my responsibility in ongoing project which needs to be completed within timeline. For the same, I will be available to assist at anytime on mail. Moreover, if you allow me, then I will give training and brief the other team members about all significant processes of current work..
Could you please suggest me procedure to transfer my work from India to Australia as per company policies? I would be grateful if you approve my request by understanding need of urgency.
Thanks for your valuable time to read and consideration my request.
Yours sincerely,
Alex Chand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ext six months starting from September. Indeed my elder brother who is living in Austr...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ofessionals strongly advice for bed rest for minimum 4 months after operation, wh...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ll significant processes of current work.. Could you please suggest me procedur...
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Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...request. Yours sincerely, Alex Chand
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23163841808 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9871355359 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.734463276836 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0113029592 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2715190063 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939441811068 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910539673936 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141259168873 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750730169155 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.