You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jason,
I am writing to let you know about my interest in working from Company's head office in the UK for a short period. As you know, I always wanted to have international work exposure so a short-term transfer to headquarters would help me achieve this goal and at this time when a lot of company’s business is being transitioned to India office, training on those upcoming assignments from head office employees, who already have expertise, would benefit both me and our team.
I understand that this deputation should not hamper my ongoing work assignment in the India office and for taking care of this I have all the setup in my laptop, which will allow me to work remotely from the UK so that deliverables are not affected. Additionally, our team is now cross-trained and can help in the hours when I am not available.
This short-term transfer program would not reach a conclusion without your support and I request you to please check the possibility of arrangement of this transfer opportunity. I would setup a meeting with you next week, to discuss this in detail.
With Regards,
Harinder
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97905759162 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93527297146 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602094240838 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.462950426 44.8134815571 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222694335543 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920695151616 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738178785337 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144799944005 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605605023 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.