You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the training course you want to do
• explain what the company could do to help you
• say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I am writing to seek your approval for the training in Machine Learning (ML) next week, about which I got to know from Microsoft Developer Network (MSDN) emailer received on 26 June 2018.
The course is a hands-on workshop from, 9 July 2018 to 11 July 2018 at Microsoft Training Center in Mumbai, furthermore, it also covers essential ML languages such as Python, R and Scala with appropriate real-world example applications.
The training course is specially designated to encourage and to provide the platform to companies which are actively involved in the area of ML development, like ours. I anticipate nomination for the participation on behalf of our firm.
This training program can play a vital role to achieve company's goal thus my goal, to introduce ML feature in our product to classify various documents, for instance, invoices, credit notes, purchase orders using image processing.
The session has a limited number of seats and is filling very fast. Would you please send me your response by 5 PM Today?
Sincerely,
Kaplan Vaghela
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84963021987 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.752873563218 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2479555814 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202069301538 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713804855071 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493739871328 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983329101853 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318015352876 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 7.59969072165 139% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.