You have not received the prize which you have won at a newspaper.
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper with below details:
- Details of how you won the prize
- What is the prize given to you
- What action you expect to be taken
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my disappointment with respect to the prize of the lucky-draw competition I won last month at you newspaper, which is yet to be delivered. I am an annual membership subscriber of your newspaper, and the membership number is KV1231245. Every month your newspaper organizes a lucky-draw contest for members, and a random winner is chosen by the lottery system.
I was trying my luck for a long time, but this time I was fortunate. Your newspaper agency awards various kind of prizes, such as a gift hamper, cash prize, a free year subscription, and many more. However, this time it was different, I won a 3 days all-in-all holiday package to Goa. In spite waiting for a month, and calling a plethora of times to the customer care centre, the prize is yet to be handed over to me. This is really leading to dissatisfaction inevitably. I request you to please coordinate with the respective department to sort it out.
I am seeking your positive response and support.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, as for, kind of, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81111111111 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9998148091 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3145328998 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206018532806 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632391165579 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981007924883 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118333917863 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939174032716 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.