The world has advanced a lot with technology, and both men and women are working to run the household. While few people argue that men should take the responsibility for earning and that women should take care of the home needs. This essay will discuss both views and will tend towards the statement that it is the responsibility of both spouses to work and earn money.
Some traditional families have a notion that women are meant to take care of children at home. They oppose the idea of the ladies going to offices for work. Also, few people are in favor of women taking the sole responsibility for household chores. Such families follow the tradition of women cooking food and running errands at home. This culture has been deeply rooted in families, and the trend is slowly changing these days.
On the flip side, most people nowadays are preferring to both spouses' working modes. Firstly, this is due to inflation, it is becoming quite essential that the husband and wife go to work to earn sufficient money to run the family. People are accustomed to a sophisticated lifestyle using modern equipment and to spend the money they need more income. In addition to this, the perspective of the people has changed to give equal opportunities to both men and women in all fields. There is no point in gender bias irrespective of the sector these days. Women have also advanced a lot and are taking top positions as CEOs and pilots. Men got accustomed to sharing the household responsibilities equally with women.
In conclusion, although it is followed by many families since ages to men working to earn money and women are limited to working at home the perspective has been changed. Both the spouses must take equal responsibilities in earning and taking care of the house considering all the above situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... On the flip side, most people nowadays are preferring to both spouses working modes. Firstly,...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e considering all the above situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82371794872 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71337718769 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496794871795 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0984488106 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16294347009 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560065885889 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476838395612 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119448236656 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437528989872 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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