You work (or an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager.
-In your letter explain why you want to work in· the company’s head office for six months
-say how your work could be done while you are away,
-ask for his\her help in in arranging it
Dear Mrs.Kogan,
I am writing to express my interest in working at our head office of our company in France for a few months (approximately 6 months) to further enhance my skills and get international experience.
This opportunity will help us improve communication with our colleagues in head office and also provide me with a chance to learn hands on about strengthening our market strategy.
Also, it will allow me to spend some time with my husband who is studying in Lyon and his course is due to end in March.
Changing location does not harm any of my current assignments. I have talked with my assistant Olga about that. She doesn’t mind taking on my responsibilities, furthermore she knows this work and has been doing it well for 3 years.
I would be grateful if you could help me in this matter since you have been helpful in arranging such opportunities for other employees previously.
Please do let me know if you would like me to provide any additional information to help make this decision.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kogan
Dear Mrs.Kogan, I am writing to express my interest...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for a few months approximately 6 months to further enhance my skills and get int...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90217391304 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0049580957 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2350756336 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187467680545 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659832926025 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645654568664 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828352575335 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665990294489 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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