You working for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how

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You working for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Explain why you want to take some time off work
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you that I will be taking some leaves as I plan to go on a short vacation to Bali along with my family.

As you are aware last year I was involved in a plethora of critical projects which were at the handover stage with the prospective clients, therefore, I have not been able to spend quality time with my family. Although my wife and kids have been complaining about it however I have been delaying my vacation due to work exigencies. Now my mind feels tired therefore I need to visit some exotic place in order to rejuvenate myself.

Furthermore, I plan to visit Bali for a week. I will be leaving on next Friday and will be back after a week. I guess one week is more than enough to enjoy and spend some quality time with children. Meanwhile, I have briefed Ana about the ongoing projects and she will be taking over as a project lead in my absence. Additionally, if she needs to discuss anything I would always be reachable on WhatsApp or Viber.
I look forward to your approval on my leave.
Yours Sincerely
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vacation to Bali along with my family. As you are aware last year I was involve...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r approval on my leave. Yours Sincerely Said
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, i guess

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42211055276 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52834240967 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1660721782 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165073891487 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617209014335 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348892917107 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938450551197 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186397909202 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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