You would like to participate in (join, take part in) a work-related seminar(IT seminar) in another country (England).
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Mr Anderson,
I am writing in regard to the IT seminar, which takes place on October 20 in Astana city. I learned about it in the newspaper “Kazakhstan” issued this Monday, but the advertisement contains no details pertaining to it.
I would like to know about what time the seminar begins, because my company needs to book tickets for it and arrange a trip to Astana for five people by train in advance. In addition, if it is possible, I would like to learn more about the program. The advertisement informs that famous companies, such as Microsoft and Google, give a presentation about their new products, but it has little information about the other participants.
Besides, the advertisement has no information about the address of the venue. From the Internet it is clear that it will happen in Abai Street, but the full address is not provided. Hence, I would be grateful, if you share the address, so that we can book a hotel nearby. Furthermore, my financial manager wants to know the exact fee, since it will be necessary for her to calculate the total cost, including the cost of the seminar for my group of five.
I would be thankful, if you send me the above mentioned information to my email tolikxxx@mail.ru or phone me on this number 87001444413. I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...nderson, I am writing in regard to the IT seminar, which takes place on October 2...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tains no details pertaining to it. I would like to know about what time the ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, in addition, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87659574468 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07054818946 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2653670329 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190771537953 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591024371245 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535788032184 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107924429556 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377173043982 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.