You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am Manjyot Kaur, a senior architect by profession residing in Mumbai, India. Yesterday, I was browsing through your website and happen to come across an advertisement about Modernistic Materials' Training. Could you please share few information about this seminar as I am keen to attend it.
Firstly, when in Sydney will this program be scheduled? I am aware that it is in the month of October but wanted to know about the dates as I need to make necessary bookings well in advance. Secondly, what topics will be covered in this training? Is it just on materials or will there be any speakers talking about modern designing too? Thirdly, will the organizers provide accommodation facilities for international travellers or should it be borne by them? Lastly, please do share the cost of the training and the mode of payment as well. Also, are there any facilities for on-spot bookings since my friends living in Sydney may join me depending on their availability.
I am very excited and look forward to your reply! Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully
Manjyot Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...erials Training. Could you please share few information about this seminar as I am ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little information'.
Suggestion: little information
...erials Training. Could you please share few information about this seminar as I am keen to atte...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and consideration. Yours faithfully Manjyot Kaur
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully Manjyot Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0376344086 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84837167196 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.192947921 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920406219621 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306079406416 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359892850739 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609035652478 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00566006725926 0.0580467560999 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.