Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some democracies believe that the most crucial aim is economic growth for any country. Although, there are other individuals who ascertain that other types of developments are fairly vital. In my opinion, one should aim towards a solution that leads towards a better society.
On one hand, economic progress is most significant so that every nation has the required funds to develop itself. These countries utilise such funds to improve the facilities and provide better infrastructure to its citizens. For example, if people earn high wages and pay the taxes to their government, the leaders will provide good healthcare facilities, building equipments, improved road systems e tcetera. This means that there will be no accidents on roads and people do not have to travel to other countries in case of a complicated surgery. In short, if a democracy grows financially, the people living in that country will lead a good standard lifestyle.
On the other hand, people believe that the governing bodies should not only focus on funds but also on other types of progress such as better education system and environmental development. A recent study indicated that many Asian students travel to other foriegn countries because they provide high level education that is beneficial for their career development. Also, the government should give equal importance to issues like global warming as economic growth is destroying our nature which in return will impact us hugely. Such climate changes may cause to the extinction of humans which means that there will be no nation to develop anymore.
To conclude, I strongly believe with the latter viewpoint because a nation should be alive for its growth. While economic growth will bring forth money to grow any country, expansion in learning department, controlling climate changes and many other forms of growth are equally important for a country to survive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example, in short, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25490196078 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7054560619 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9861958825 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25359913858 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081118978902 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468129825892 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148742865566 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281250001317 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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