You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/madam,
i’m writing about their seminar which is strong relationships of your job. this seminar will be so useful for attenders.
I want to attend it and ı’ m so enthusiastic for it. because ı desire to improve my job skills for my future. but I have not got enough information about it. Your letter was not enough for me. I think I can get more information from there especially accommodation is so important for me. I haven’t got any friends close the seminar area and it is big problem. However you can fix something on this situation for me and other person that like me. Moreover, I wonder our seminar schedule because you said that that seminar was 3 days. because of this reason, I want to spent my time in full during the seminar. I want to talk about seminar cost because ı couldn’t find enough information but I heard somethings about it and ı was scared it. I think you will say true price about seminar and it will not be so high.
i’m looking forward to your response. I hope we can solve our problem with together.
Best regards.
G. Gürkan AYDEMİR
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/madam, i'm writing about their seminar whi...
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...ch is strong relationships of your job. this seminar will be so useful for attenders...
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...nar will be so useful for attenders. I want to attend it and ı' m so ent...
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Suggestion: But
...to improve my job skills for my future. but I have not got enough information about...
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Suggestion: However,
...the seminar area and it is big problem. However you can fix something on this situation...
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... you said that that seminar was 3 days. because of this reason, I want to spent my time...
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... seminar and it will not be so high. i'm looking forward to your respons...
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...can solve our problem with together. Best regards. G. Gürkan AYDEMİR ...
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... Best regards. G. Gürkan AYDEMİR
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69543147208 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68307606359 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7466486204 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1333333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219220363546 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662994885473 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04806125094 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124613119052 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914916748907 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.