many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
it is believed that women make better parents than men and that is why they have greater role in raising children in most societies. however, their father can be role model for them and they believed that their father may do everything to be care with them. children also desire their father to be near them. In my opinion, women have lots of chance to be good parents in their life for their children and so they have to consider them to meet all problems in their life.
To begin with, women have a important role in all societies and they always manage to their families and. there are lots of missions for their families. but most important issue is growing a child for better future. therefore, women need to be close to their children and they support their children to all their problems. Eventough some women want to take all power on their hands about their life, they can sacrifice to care more about their children than themselves. Moreover, they can communicate with their children like a more comfortable than their father. they feel their life to adhere to their children’s life.
however, men always feel alone such as last person in their families and they do not want to interfere with their children for their life style just as protecting dangerous event to them. Actually, they do not want to take all their children’s responsible. because, they can not show them to do something on dangerous events. therefore, they can accuse themselves for their children mistakes and they can be strict people against their children. Alltough they do not comment on their children’s behaivours, they may say everything to them. everybody knows it is big dilemma, but nobody can produce any solutions for this kind of problems. they covet to be interested in their lifestyle but they know it is impossible. they caution their children against their children’s behaivours, but they prefer to abstain from their children’s lifes.
To sum up, there is no doubt that women will be more important than men in the future. men prefer to give lots of chances to their partner for growing a child and women want to use more effective way for growing educated young people. it is claimed that parents deal with growing child like a company management. All individuals are so satisfied from this situation. everybody wants to do a lot for them. but time is not enough for everybody. because of this reason, women can overcome something for their families and they have to be a step ahead for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 75.0 24.0651302605 312% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84953703704 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61993579533 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407407407407 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1312463112 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5769230769 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232890831534 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935976796982 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13513380748 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17655212841 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753319825657 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.