Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
In your letter:
when and where you hired it
describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regards to inform about a minor accident I faced while driving the car I have taken from your company on rent.
I booked a Toyota car on last Thursday from your Banani showroom for 2 days from Friday to Saturday. I paid in advance and took the car of WX74650 template number on Friday morning.
Basically, it was my weekend and I wanted to go for a long drive with my friend. We are driving alternately because our journey was Dhaka to Cox’s Bazar which is almost 400 kilometer way. Everything was good but when we return Dhaka on Saturday night we faced huge traffic jam near Banani. That time one biker was trying to overtake us in wrong way and hit the back light at the left side and broke the outer glass.
He ran away immediately and I could not catch him. I went to mechanic at that night and fixed the light with my cost but design of the light is slightly different.
I hope you will consider the incident and provide me a refund of the repairing cost.
Will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Md. Shawan Shahriar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oom for 2 days from Friday to Saturday. I paid in advance and took the car of WX7...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49751243781 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29535007451 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2279922505 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197884830798 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656340688673 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758517947007 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111894346687 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873123825843 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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