Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following:
• when and where you hired the car
• describe how the accident happened
• what kind of action did you take after the accident
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I am John Gresham, a resident of East Ham, London. I have been availing car hire service, your company offers, since 2010. I am writing this letter to describe an incident that occurred last week on my trip to Manchester in one of your company’s car that was rented.
On 13th of March, last week, I made a reservation for a Bentley to drive to my cousin’s place in Manchester. The booking was made at the East Ham branch for the next 6 days until weekend that was supposed to be the 20th of March.
While I was driving to the county along with my family, I happened to stop at an eatery near Liverpool to have some food. Minutes later, a huge shipment truck heading to Scotland has a break failure and ran on to the cars parked at the parking lot and eventually stopped hitting a huge lamp pole.
Soon the police arrived and as I was able to get the insurance details from the dashboard, I called up the insurance company to report the accident without any further delay. The insurance agent got the vehicle towed to the nearest workshop and I ensured all the formalities are done.
I would come to the branch personally and explain. If there is anything else that needed my immediate attention, please do not hesitate to call me on my personal number.
Thank You
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am John Gresham, a resident of East Ha...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rvice, your company offers, since 2010. I am writing this letter to describe an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5864978903 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55984296907 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649789029536 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0045522389 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173165452815 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593596638226 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625374675826 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066053354437 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600595588783 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.