Your child is going on a 3-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher in your letter:
- say why are you would like to go on the trip
- suggest what you could do to help during the trip
- ask another questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Johnson,
My name is Jack Robbins and I am writing to let you know that I am interested in going on the following trip to France. I am Sara's father from Mrs. Smiths' class.
First of all, I truly appreciate it for arranging this trip. I suppose it is going to be a great one especially for the kids as they can enjoy a lot after a long year at school.
I have noticed that you are looking for some parents to accompany you in the trip. Since you are travelling to Paris, I could be a great help to you, due to my friends in French language. I also have a great Bond which other Sara's classmates, so I think I can be a good assistance.
As a suggestion, I can arrange to visit the Eiffel Tower and The Louvre museum. I am positive that will love these sites, and I, as their tour guide, will do my best to create a memorable trip for them.
Finally, I would appreciate if you could tell me what kinds of accommodation have you booked and what is the exact day of our departure. You can contact me at this number for further talk: 0335467926
I look forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
Jason Statham
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, so, i suppose, i think, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27777777778 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46440712325 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3677539077 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201499168272 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642078961238 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585695813215 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906650592091 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371028650967 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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