Dear Mr. John,
In writing to volunteer myself for the children trip, for which you had sought parents help.
I have been to London a few times in the past, I feel I could be of some guidance during the trip. Moreover, with me being a doctor, I can surely be of assistance on this trip.
Ensuring that the children stay healthy would be my prime motive. As the children are participating in different sports activity there, it is possible that a child gets hurt, and thus I plan to carry by first-aid kit with me. Besides that, I am a very good cook as well. If required, I can prepare different meals for children, like cakes and sandwiches.
I was wondering, if the school would be covering the cost of the travel for parents? What about the accommodation and other expenses that may arise?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Tim Burkey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63461538462 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54805071749 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711538461538 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5897190095 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7272727273 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134438041294 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465291942604 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027919792175 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667181487338 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120569101879 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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