Your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for one thing. Write a letter to your manager and include the following:
– What do you like about the uniform?
– What don’t you like about the uniform?
– Make suggestions how to improve the uniform.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the recent dress code introduced in our organisation.
At the onset, one thing that delighted me is the colour of the uniform. As it is always preferred to wear light shades in the work environment, this greenish color of our uniform will serve the purpose. Moreover, a dress code also reflects professionalism, which is the key to maintain discipline.
One thing that annoyed me about the work uniform is that it is similar for all the employees. Same kind of uniform will definitely make it difficult to recognize male and female workers and often leads to confusion and misunderstanding.
I believe so because both gender has different comfort requirements. I would suggest that there should be a unique attire for female staff. Instead of trousers, women can wear skirts or tunics, which will help them to feel comfortable.
I hope you will consider my opinion.
Yours sincerely,
Anne Milton
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07453416149 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92675130993 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0866664027 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227556047213 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075355923057 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655357337626 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106095656927 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559128594871 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.