Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often claimed that prevalence of huge globalization and set up of transnational organization has an advantageous impact on the whole society. This essay completely agrees with the give statement because it provides wide range of employment opportunities to present generations and also help economies to develop further.
The most significant advantage of introducing multinational corporation around the planet is that it offers a myriad of job prospects for youngsters. That is to say, as many new foreign organizations prefer to expand their enterprise in different part of the world, it automatically accelerates the number of jobs in host location. As a result, overpopulated countries also get a chance to explore their talent in different career prospects because they have wide access to abundant of career opportunities in these companies. To cite an example, a survey conducted by the National Sample Survey Organization in New Delhi in 2019, on a group of 500 employees who worked for multinational firms revealed that 82 % of them were able to get recruited without struggle because of the arrival of new companies in their countries that offered them bright employment prospective.
The another predominant favorable impact of globalized organization is that it helps the developing nations by upgrading their standard of living. This is because, many developed multinational organizations organize several volunteering campaigns as they are financially stable and thus provides basic education and shelter facilities to unprivileged people. Eventually, introducing foreign project in the developing states help the local community because they would gain access to advanced medical facilities, which is beneficial for their health and holistic development. For instance, Google, which is one of the renowned multinational organization, had hosted several relief campaigns during the coronavirus pandemic in India in 2020 and it had provided tremendous support to the people living in inhumane conditions without food and accommodation.
In conclusion, I believe that foreign corporations tend to have a positive influence on the overall population because it help individuals to find an appropriate employment opportunity and also help local community by offering humanitarian services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the whole, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74927113703 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35347708284 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2607349832 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.272727273 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114386695287 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423791621429 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319479614177 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672642893694 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032681524864 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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