Your family is moving to new city. Write a letter to the real estate agency in your new city to enquire about rental house in your letter,
- Explain when you are moving and the reason.
- Describe where you would like to live.
- Mention the type of house you need.
Dear Sir,
I have been residing with my family at Vadodara for last 2 years recently my father has promoted to senior executive officer and the company has deputed him to Mumbai. I am writing this to enquire about the rental house in Mumbai.
Firstly, my father has received promotion letter officially last week. The company wanted him as a senior officer at head office which is located at Churchgate in Mumbai. Therefore, we are planning to move by next week at Mumbai. My family is looking for rental flat in good locality area where the local transport facility is easily available. Moreover, the supermarket shall be also reachable easily so that it can get all the essential things for the home.
Secondly, there is total four members in my family. My elder sister is studying in 9th standard. I am looking for 2BHK flat having at least 650 square feet of carpet area. The flat should be semi furnished with gas connection.
It would be so grateful moment for us if you could find out best located house. I am ready to pay your brokerage charges and one month advance rent as a deposit. I am looking forward to your positive reply.
Thank you,
Yours faithfully,
Nisarg Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be semi furnished with gas connection. It would be so grateful moment for us if...
^^^
Line 13, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou, Yours faithfully, Nisarg Chauhan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76555023923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45152635239 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674641148325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3656456026 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143327757804 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052100907388 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625064474786 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697611751727 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483211291444 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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