Your family is moving to a new city. Write a letter to the real estate agency in your new city to enquire about a rental house.
In your letter, you should tell:
– explain when you are moving and the reason
– describe where you would like to live
– mention the type of house you need.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have found a reference for your company from the local newspaper and I am writing this letter to seek information about rented properties in New York City.
My father is a field officer at Smart Technologies and due to his job transfer to New York City, I am looking for a decent rented apartment for my family. We have to shift there on July 22nd.
As far as the location is concerned, my family would prefer to live in the centre of the city, where we can access basic facilities such as transportation, supermarket, school and park conveniently. Moreover, we want to be surrounded by co-operative neighbours, who can help us in our initial days.
With regard to the type of house, we need a spacious and semi-furnished apartment, which consists of two suited bedrooms, an equipped kitchen with basic utilities such as a refrigerator and a dishwasher. In addition to this, a living room with a window that overlooks greenery would be an ideal place for us to live. I am ready to spend anything between $800 and $1000 per month as rent.
As I have limited time, please find a suitable place for us as soon as possible. I am reachable at 9876543210. Alternatively, you can e-mail me at ell@gmail.com.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, in addition, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03081638434 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1107932308 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143691462176 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457440867906 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528868218324 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715507398496 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554434602265 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.