Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Hey John,
Many thanks for scheduling to watch a movie together but I can’t follow the plan. Unfortunately, my boss asked me to stay late at work and finish a task.
We have a deadline which is reaching by next Monday and we are very back of the plan. Therefore, my boss asked all the staff to work until 8 pm. However, I, fortunately, met Rosy today on the way to the office and I told her about our plan to watch Sharks. She shows interest to come instead of me. I know her from high school where we first met each other. She is a very nice person and has plenty of information about the different techniques which are used in Hollywood. I know you have a great taste to discuss the used techniques in the movie afterward. Thus, I believe she can be a good replacement for me.
If you are OK with her, give her a call at 2345638.
Kind regards,
Sorena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49090909091 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47477633461 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6340168794 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.75 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107928940291 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364774454787 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420104697084 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786758916203 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00703670179596 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.