Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Hi Jack,
I hope you are well. Unfortunately, I cannot come to the movie this weekend since my son is terribly ill from last night. I am really sorry about it.
I know you put so much time and effort to plan this and the tickets are not refundable. Therefore, I think Jenni can be a good substitution for me. She is a very cute and nice girl and I know her for about near 10 years. She is an artist and a teacher of art at Jeremy school. Since films and movies are a type of art, she may be able to give you some useful insight about it. Nevertheless, I have already given her a heads up and she knew that may call her. you can contact her at 3546783.
I hope you enjoy the movie and have a great time and sorry again that I cannot be with you. Hopefully, we can meet soon.
Best wishes,
Sorena.
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| 2020-01-08 | hitesh saini | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-30 | Ammu helen | 78 | view |
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| 2019-12-10 | Sorena Eshkoor | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 460, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...eads up and she knew that may call her. you can contact her at 3546783. I ho...
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Line 9, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll her. you can contact her at 3546783. I hope you enjoy the movie and have a gr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15625 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23550889061 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63125 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4107655235 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1538461538 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200605348176 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704058617656 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714092107152 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15201158968 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500681070138 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.96 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.