Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
• describe the gift
• tell how it will be delivered
• explain why you chose it.
Dear Simmy,
How are you? Hope you are heal and hearty. Many congratulations to you from sifting to the new house. I have seen the photos of the house in the facebook.
I have placed an order yesterday for us. I have seen the beautiful wall scenery of three beautiful white horses. All three of them was running in the same direction. It was really very adorable and just through of you. I am sure it will look beautiful on the wall of your drawing room above the sofa set.
I was mentioned that it will be delivered to you by next week or before. Amazon is trust worthy site and it always deliver the quality product before the estimated time. So you can definitely get the gift before time and am assured about the quality as I have product house hold items from the same site last month and I am quite satisfied by their customer service.
Actually, one of friend has told me that white running horses are sign of progress and growth. It is lucky to have their picture in the home as it bring good fortune to the family. Therefore I choose to gift it to you, because only it look wonderful but also bring good luck to the family.
Hope you will like the gift!
Yours truly
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'healed'.
Suggestion: healed
...ear Simmy, How are you? Hope you are heal and hearty. Many congratulations to you...
^^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and hearty. Many congratulations to you from sifting to the new house. I have se...
^^
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have placed an order yesterday for us. I have seen the beautiful wall scenery of...
^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'delivers'?
Suggestion: delivers
...azon is trust worthy site and it always deliver the quality product before the estimate...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...as it bring good fortune to the family. Therefore I choose to gift it to you, because onl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 235, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...oose to gift it to you, because only it look wonderful but also bring good luck to t...
^^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like the gift! Yours truly Maninder
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37668161435 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21858465669 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2718390676 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266341619303 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855157693634 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741761727873 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150596582116 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591997843872 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.