The number of people getting higher who wearing fashionable clothes. Is it good or bad situation?
These days trend of wearing outfits of latest fashion is increasing continuously. Individuals may have different views about the positive and negative aspects of this change; however, I assert that running after fashion is having detrimental effects on both people and society.
To begin with, fashionable attires are mostly popular among the youngsters; they are trying to fellow the celebrities. Youth is the age at which adolescents has to focus on the studies and complete their education with full determination, then only they can have a successful career ahead, but rather than focusing on study they are busy in shopping and posting their picture with fashionable attires on social networking sites. To exemplify, there are many cases where students have given up studies because of lack of interest. Apart from this, adults are also attracted towards clothes of latest trend and sometime they become extravagant and spend huge money on buying them. Due to this they are not able to save money for the future requirement and ultimately have to face untoward repercussions.
To substantiate further, due to peer pressure children force their parents to buy clothes of latest fashion for them. Many times it happen that due to financial circumstances they cannot afford to buy expensive clothes. Ultimately, this will give rise to inequality among the people and affects the society in negative way. Furthermore, grown up also make the judgment of economic strength of the person on the basis of the clothes they wear. So many people avoid social get together if the trendy attire is not in their budget. This is creating huge discrimination among society. People are forgetting the emotions, social connection and getting indulge more in the materialist world and diverted from the moral responsibilities.
In conclusion, unequivocally more and more people are choosing latest clothing style, but the drawbacks of this choice are irrefutable. Leading the simple life and not following the adverse trend can definitely help the coming generation to elevate in their life in much better way and make this world a better place to live
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
These days trend of wearing outfits of latest fashion is increasing continuously. Ind...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ults are also attracted towards clothes of latest trend and sometime they become extravag...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...dren force their parents to buy clothes of latest fashion for them. Many times it happen ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
... latest fashion for them. Many times it happen that due to financial circumstances the...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choosing the latest'.
Suggestion: choosing the latest
... unequivocally more and more people are choosing latest clothing style, but the drawbacks of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, apart from, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81241549359 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584302325581 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.039856995 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140728418096 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490089795521 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403969366563 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090344971434 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480403774187 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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