Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• say why a driving licence is advantageous
• recommend a driving school
• give any extra guidance/tips
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Simona,
I hope you find the letter in a great health. I got your letter and got happy knowing that, finally you are giving a thought about driving license. I say definitely go for it.
Firstly, having license has few benefits. Namely, having a proof as photo id apart from flexibility to drive. Besides, the license can help you insured on basis of the location.
Secondly, I can refer you a good driving tutor who taught me the skill to drive. He is Mr. James from AMD driving school. Recently he has increased his scope of area to teach so place should not a problem.
At last, I would suggest you to take 2 lessons from him and come to my place. You can practise using my car as much as you need. This is will help you save few dollars. Let me know whenever you are ready.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Wishes,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...giving a thought about driving license. I say definitely go for it. Firstly, h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21583361262 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.717981131 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.1333333333 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7333333333 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21021934487 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603528795023 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626224514268 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10654754798 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742722220838 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.