Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Agree to this arrangement.
– Say what time is suitable for you.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
Dear Friend,
Today I received your message telling me that you will send your son to our house this weekend to spend some time with the kids.
From my side I don't mind he's welcomed. My kids will be excited for Jeff visit, they can play at the backyard and have some fun since Saturday is a sunny day.
I suggest arriving at 11:00am; since I need to clean out the house and after I'll go out for shopping to bring grocery for lunch and dinner.
Afternoon, I was thinking to take them to the Mall to have desserts and after they can watch the latest Lion King movie, if you don not mind. When the film done we will be back home around 8:00pm. I'll prepare for dinner and waiting for your arrival, both your husband and you to eat and spend the night together.
Thank you and expecting your visit all at the end of this week.
Sincerely Yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ome time with the kids. From my side I dont mind hes welcomed. My kids will be exci...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ith the kids. From my side I dont mind hes welcomed. My kids will be excited for J...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...I need to clean out the house and after Ill go out for shopping to bring grocery fo...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...one we will be back home around 8:00pm. Ill prepare for dinner and waiting for your...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26708074534 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93973872467 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2980147829 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233176173413 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083496184238 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878658419051 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126592186262 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659775050507 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.