Your friend would like to visit your hometown. Write a letter to him and say
What is the best time of the year to visit your hometown?
Suggest some places to visit in your hometown.
Invite your friend to meet your family.
Dear John
I hope this letter will id you in radiant and best of spirit.Yesterday I received you letter and come to know about your desire of visiting my hometown. It is such a good opportunity to meet again and spend time with each other.
As you asked about the period in which you can enjoy your trip, in your letter, then I think October will be perfect for coming here, because it is the month of indian festivals. I am living in Himachal Pardesh and Kullu my hometown is well famous for its Dussera. It is a symbol of “Truth wins over lie”.
There are some other places like Manali where we will go together and enjoy the natural sceneries and weather also. It is a tourist place, which contribute 75% of the tourism revenue to the state. There are so many activities like river rafting and mountain trekking which will be enjoyed together, because we both are adventures by nature.
Moreover, on the occasion of Diwali festival of lights, my all family members will come back home from their jobs to enjoy this festival together. It will be a good chance to meet with all of then at my home apart from this on this day my mother cooked so many delicious food which we will enjoy.
I hope you will plan in this particular time to enjoy a lot. Kindly book your tickets and inform me in advance so that i can arrange all the activities in advance before your arrival. Give regards to your younger siblings and greeting to your parents
Yours truly
Heema
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Yesterday
...ll id you in radiant and best of spirit.Yesterday I received you letter and come to know ...
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Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...enjoy the natural sceneries and weather also. It is a tourist place, which contribut...
^^^^
Line 11, column 257, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much delicious food', 'a good deal of delicious food'.
Suggestion: much delicious food; a good deal of delicious food
...om this on this day my mother cooked so many delicious food which we will enjoy. I hope you will...
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Line 13, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ickets and inform me in advance so that i can arrange all the activities in advan...
^
Line 17, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to your parents Yours truly Heema
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58208955224 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37089211638 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.109170549 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25578866163 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888888039688 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106404778284 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144789364708 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104902000513 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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