More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for first time. What problems does this cause and What do you think are the possible solutions?
Cars are being bought by the people belonging to the emerging economies because of obtain technologies and easy ways of financing like loans and instalments. However it is the major reason for increasing air pollution but the solutions are not out of reach, by increasing the price of products and fuel can decrease the number of buyers.
Spreading air pollution by vehicles is the major concern of the nation because it is the cause of some severe diseases like lung problems, asthma and many more ailments. Some in toxic substances are released by the vehicles which result in depletion the ozone layer and affect the human body. It is also a reason for global warming. For instance, a survey report by the local newspaper shows that 75% of the pollution has increased by more and more vehicles running on the roads and 20% by manufacturing units. Hence, increasing the number of vehicles create problems not only for the nation but also for individuals.
Undoubtedly, problems can eradicate by raising the cost of cars and the fuel used by them. As per the law of demand if the rate of the product will raise then it will affect adversely on demand which means the desire of purchasing cars will go downward. Moreover, high rate of fuel will also play an essential role to control the pollution, because fuel is a compulsory substance for any vehicle, if the rate will up then people will think twice before purchasing a vehicle because without fuel moving any vehicle is impossible. For example, when Japan’s government was planning to increase the rate of fuel residents stop their vehicles on the road, because they know it will create a burden on individuals pocket. Thus, in this way authorities can help to reduce the level of pollution.
Conclusively, cars are liked by the people, because they can be easily affordable by them. But people are unaware of the issues from an excess quantity of vehicle. By taking some preventive measure these problems can be sorted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89349112426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65278883637 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9194732596 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149122221971 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512313046993 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295752439718 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855386915633 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02972584099 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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