Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.
In your letter, you should tell:
– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased
– what you will do if it is increased.
Dear Mr John,
I am Ell Green and residing in one of your rented apartments. My apartment address is 749, Woodside Avenue. I am writing in response to your letter in which you have informed about the increment in monthly rent by 10%.
With regards to the rent increase, I would like to take a reference from the signed rental agreement, where we have agreed on a fixed monthly rent of Rs. 10000 for one year commencing from June 1, 2019, to May 31, 2019. I have been staying in this apartment for only 3 months as your tenant and always paid rent on time. Moreover, the rent I am paying is already on the higher side and excluding the maintenance cost. Therefore, I feel that it would be inappropriate to increase the rent in such a short span and would be against the agreement.
I hope that a generous person like you would understand my genuine concern and reconsider your plan of rent revision. In case, you still feel the need to revise the rent then I am sorry to inform you that I would be forced to vacate this apartment. Therefore, I request you once again to rethink on this increment plan.
I anticipate cooperation from you on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55967445177 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578703703704 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4570256344 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311748382046 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1182842719 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733131228597 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184130598461 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717512688472 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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