The people who are selecting cosmetic procedures are rising recently. There can be several reasons towards this inclination. In my opinion, this is negative development.
To begin with, people are nowadays more concerned regarding their looks. If someone does not like their nose or lips, for example they will not hesitate in pertaining small noninvasive procedures. Moreover, most of the times strong influence from celebrities and social media stars also play a key role. Due to easy accessibility of social media platforms things become irresistible. After some successful breast implant surgeries in Hollywood during late 90’s, the women of western world went crazy towards this approach. Apart from this, latest operations are less costly and can be done within short span of time. So people especially women tend to incline towards them.
There are however, lot of demerits towards this development. Firstly everything that looks good on celebrity does not mean that it will be the same case for laymen. They are taking optimum care and measures for all these procedures. Besides this, if somehow surgery goes wrong or any issue arises, a patient can loose his life. The very famous Michel Jackson is the biggest example of this. Because of multiple surgical procedures, ultimately he lost his life. So one has to keep in mind all this negatives before undergoing any surgical procedure.
To conclude, the craziness towards good looks and easy availability of procedures can be regarded as contributing factors. The drawbacks surpasses the perks towards this development.
- It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Some believe that charitable organizations should help people no matter where they live Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on more GM foods What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this 56
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don t need and can t afford What are reasons for these behaviors What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem 61
- The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle What are the advantages of this trend Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... surgery goes wrong or any issue arises, a patient can loose his life. The very f...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Suggestion: surpass
... as contributing factors. The drawbacks surpasses the perks towards this development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, as to, for example, in short, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73325008003 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1229778605 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5263157895 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1578947368 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0754655199367 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243855777805 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260307570694 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483340084786 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182306358419 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.92 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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