Dear sir,
I am writing with regards to the shutting down a sports and leisure club owned by you. As it is the only fitness center in our local community, closing it will have a huge impact on it.
Firstly, I along with my family is very much involved with doing a lot of activities in it such as my parents attend yoga classes, I play badminton and my brother practice tennis. In addition, my sister is a Zumba student at the center. Thus, we rely a lot on it for fun and fitness.
Moreover, not only my family, but it is a great benefit to the community as most of the locals work in IT department and dependent on the club for keeping themselves active. Also, due to performing activities in a group, they get time to get in touch with each other, Hence better social environment.
It can be clearly seen the bad influence of closing the club on locals, For instance, it will reduce the physical activities for them along with the social gathering. Similarly, they will be required to travel far for gym or sports club. As a result, they will avoid it due to lack of time. Therefore, closing it is not a good step for our society.
Finally, I request you to give a thought about it.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42920353982 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50964542323 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2961006396 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114876704052 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461304630706 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500685173491 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575947776823 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534744277672 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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