Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
Explain why the centre is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear council of Valentinovka,
I'm Ivan Kolos, the regular settler of Valentinovka district of Korolov town.
I'm writing in regards to your surprising decision to demolish the local gym Territory of Fitness to economize the municipal budget, which is far more significant than the declining one of the means of community leisure.
We've had a great time in the gym so far, as we have a season pass and we go there on a regular basis. The thing is that this fitness centre is not only a single place providing facilities for sports activities in our neighbourhood, but also it is extremely popular here. Hence, by destroying that source of joy for the locals, you will set them against your administration, which in fact quite risky before the mayor election. The steal of doing sports might damage people well-being, their health and increase the risk of premature deaths as citizens don't have an alternative.
Please stop the legislation of cutting back the sports funding or else I have to escalate this issue to the mayor and prepare the public demonstrations outside of administration building.
I'm looking forward to your quick response.
Sincerely yours,
Ivan Kolos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16923076923 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9051813877 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697435897436 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3498033587 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12831481051 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442890504738 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358595717941 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636666628031 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399683286087 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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