Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1. give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
2. explain why the sorts and leisure center is important for the local community
3. describe the possible effects on local people if the center closses
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Irana Smirnova and I am writing to raise my concern regarding the plans to close our local sports and leisure center. It is hard to underestimate the importance of this center for citizens; in fact, it became the point where we all meat each other to share some positive emotions and spend free time. Also, one cannot miss the influence of sporting activities provided there on the health of the people.
My family is used to going to the center several times a week. My husband and I attend fitness lessons for adults on Monday and Wednesday after work. My two sons went to the center after school; they have a place there to do their homework, to play with other children and relax in safe environment. On weekends we usually meet friends there and o to the swimming pool are open-air tennis courts provided it doesn't rain cats and dogs.
I can think of several negative consequences the closure of the center could do. Firstly, people could become less engaged in sport activities which will definatily affect their health. Secondly, children will lose the opportunity to spend their time in a healthy atmosphere and will spend more time at the street. Finally, for the people interested in sport it will become more difficult to get to the place to excercize as the nearest sports center in in Torinton which is 30 miles away.
I beleive this question deserves close attention
Yours faithfully,
Iruna Smirnova
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lts on Monday and Wednesday after work. My two sons went to the center after schoo...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... are open-air tennis courts provided it doesnt rain cats and dogs. I can think of s...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... excercize as the nearest sports center in in Torinton which is 30 miles away. I b...
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Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to close'
Suggestion: to close
...ay. I beleive this question deserves close attention Yours faithfully, Iruna S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80555555556 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4648288132 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2879188061 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119169009741 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425474929176 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403464802828 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056140248941 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232401242542 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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