Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the decision you have made about closing the sport and leisure center which is located in Bonus street. As you know, the center is the only one in this neighborhood. My friends and I have always been the active members of the center. In addition, my parents really need to do physical exercises in this fully-equipped center due to their backaches.
On the other hand, these types of centers are really required in the modern life. This is because people have to work hard during a day so attending the sport center help them gain more energy to keep their health well in order to work much better. Thus, It is most significant for both young and older people.
If the center is closed, you will see negative impacts of this action. First of all, local people would be away from doing exercise due to the fact that they do not have enough time to go to other centers which are too far. Secondly, individuals would not be able to do the best in their workplaces. Therefore, it could have straight effects on the outputs of companies.
I hope you change your decision if possible.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, you know, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35614721174 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4098068373 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3076923077 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 4.34317383033 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147738050209 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473190353458 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453960389394 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976529087127 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408923298639 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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