Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Teaching for children how to behave well is an important task for parents who want their children to become good people. Children's behaviours are mainly affected by their parents, so the behaviours which are whether good or bad depends on their parents' actions. Although some people argue that children have to be responsible for their acts, in my opinion, I believe that parents are only persons who have responsibility for behaviours of their children because children always obey their parents and it is a rule of state law.
Obeying parents is especially important for children because parents show them what they should do. Before becoming adults and independent persons, children often observe actions of their parents and follow their parents' advice. Therefore, their behaviours are consequences of what they have observed and taught by their parents. For instance, my neighbours have a son always criticize and speak profanity words such as FUCK, What the hell, etc. The boy has such misbehaviours because his parents often speak these words and debate of whatever between them happen at any time. This is one of two reasons why I believe that parents should be responsible for their children's behaviours.
In most countries in the world, there are rules of state law that force parents take responsibilities for their children's misbehaviours. Some parents only know give the birth to their children and they do not care about teaching knowledge for their kids. Children will not know how to do right things and have misbehaviours. Thus, these rules are created to make parents more responsible for their kids. For example, in Vietnam, there are rules that force parents taking responsibilities for teaching as well as feeding until their children are 18-year-old.
In conclusion, in order children becoming good people for society, parents have to be responsible for their children not because they affect their children mostly, but the law forces them to take responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 20.9802955665 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 319.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26645768025 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8068420056 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3496524175 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319826164445 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155709584546 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729892140077 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247575102095 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217970878681 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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