Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that is runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request you to reconsider your decision to close the AAA sports and leisure centre in our community due to monetary reasons.
Firstly, my family go to this place for various activities. My wife and my daughter take yoga lessons at gyms area every day. I and my son use sports facilities like swimming pool and tennis court frequently.
Secondly, there are only two such leisure and sport centres for 3 thousand people in our community. We are still in need of more recreation centres for the benefits of the community like safe places for children to play freely and favourite spot for community members to build up relationships. Closure of this centre will be shocking news for us.
Finally, if the council still goes ahead with the closure decision, it will deeply affect the neighborhood both physically and mentally. Teenagers could get involved in unsuitable activities and in unsafe places, adults will be difficult to socialize.
Please reconsider your decision for the sake of our community.
Yours faithfully,
Patrick Love
- Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that is runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letterGive details of how you and your friends or family use the centreExplain why the sports and leis 78
- Employer sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these vi 78
- Some people say that all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree. 67
- You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letterSay where you think you left the papersExplain why they are so importa 73
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she would get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter.Say why he/she would not enjoy going to collegeExplain wh 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06179775281 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7240703502 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1244942015 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172637682534 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668450623763 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641146477022 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949070917131 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765647363486 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.